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Voice On An Apple Pie Wave
Contributed by
invierno
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Monday, 18th August 2014 @ 04:05:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Cool leaning bark (partly finished porch)
rough shorn on my sweaty arm-
Your voice floats on an apple pie wave
to my bandanna flapped ears-
sweat, my body's tears held at bay with
your happy sounds, head surrounded in
biker blue and dark wet.
I smile though the grime as you laugh
recalling, better than it was, the time
we caught the rain (or it caught us)
locked outside that umbrella store.
In your lovely view of life,
we didn't get wet and miserable-
we loved the soak and treasured the wetness
now your music wafts- you speak and that time for the dripping socks
and cold I got
make me smile through my soaked bandanna,
grinning as my lawn chirps, You're not done with me yet!
Copyright ©
invierno
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2014-08-18 16:05:54]
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Re: Voice On An Apple Pie Wave
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by Blackheart on
Tuesday, 19th August 2014 @ 10:31:24 AM AEST
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Pleasant and relaxing this poem is. It sounds wonderful, sorta like a dream. Beautiful work here
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Re: Voice On An Apple Pie Wave
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th August 2014 @ 02:25:28 AM AEST
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weird note- cool poem! beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Voice On An Apple Pie Wave
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2020 @ 01:57:00 PM AEST
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Somehow I think Alice White would be proud or the other way around. Cool flow indeed.
Very interesting poem- very! |
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