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Breathe Again
Contributed by
steven_fenton123
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Monday, 18th August 2014 @ 04:53:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Don't ever close your eyes,
Don't turn your back on life.
And please don't shed a tear,
unless it's from your heart.
Don't ever lean on the falling,
they are only running away.
Put your faith in the ones,
the ones who are by your side now.
I cried a river down to my crooked smile,
and hoped it would take me to the sea,
and the moon would pull the tide out,
and I would never swim for shore.
But I found an ally in my shadow,
and a reason in the silence.
I found an answer in my heart,
to the questions from my brain.
I had to breathe again, I had to live again.
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2014-08-18 16:53:26]
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Re: Breathe Again
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by AngelFox on
Monday, 18th August 2014 @ 10:18:14 PM AEST
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| Very inspiring. "and the moon would pull the tide out" Wow! Great writing! |
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Re: Breathe Again
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by Invierno on
Tuesday, 19th August 2014 @ 09:44:26 AM AEST
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Wonderful! You've done a masterful job on mood evocation. I like that you didn't take the 'easy out' on rhyme scheme when you could have and the poem would not have suffered. As it is, it climbs above the others.
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