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Malcolm
Contributed by
northernlights
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Monday, 25th August 2014 @ 04:20:22 PM in AEST
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Faces from childhood
come close to whisper before becoming ghosts
Of the past, and immediacy slams into view as life is illuminated as
Transitory.Those that bring you happiness in snapshots of memories
To guarantee a smile, and those more difficult, more complicated and
Yet all part of your picture,of your home, of passing through, and feelings
Heighten before settling yet again to lives with a future.
For some, as with the flame, see death as the extinguisher, but memory
Lights an eternal candle, to warm the soul even in the forgotten years,
And you my friend!
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northernlights
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2014-08-25 16:20:22]
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Re: Malcolm
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th August 2014 @ 08:06:38 PM AEST
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but memory lights an eternal candle
Love that...as well as the rest of the poem but that struck something in me (remembering my sister)
Beautiful poem yet sorry for your loss. ♥♥♥ |
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Re: Malcolm
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by fredmonte101 on
Tuesday, 26th August 2014 @ 10:59:21 AM AEST
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| Wonderful Poem. God bless you. |
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Re: Malcolm
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by sanders on
Wednesday, 27th August 2014 @ 01:03:40 PM AEST
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| Very nicely expressed...great poetry |
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Re: Malcolm
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th August 2014 @ 05:43:33 PM AEST
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Poignant and powerful, a wonderful dedication not only to your departed friend but more generally to all those we have lost throughout our lives.
Memories should always return the smile.
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Re: Malcolm
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by speedy on
Monday, 8th September 2014 @ 08:26:12 PM AEST
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You ever read something & it makes you speechless? Like you feel emotions, but can't put them into words?
That's how I felt reading this one. All I can say is:
Great write!
Hannah B |
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