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How bueatiful a New sun
Contributed by
invierno
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Thursday, 4th September 2014 @ 05:37:56 PM in AEST
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This morning my toes touched grass, cool and wet-
only I know how it felt right then-
the joy and peace of wet feeling squirmed in,
the dawn's dewy inclusion within.
I soaked and absorbed sun's new rise,
climbing my feet to my heart
to blue dawning skies;
a day fresh and virgin-
sweet and untouched-
not debauched not soiled
by life's cruel crutch.
The sun so new, so sweet in the dawn,
spoke to my heart far beyond
the toils and soils my life has wrought-
this gleaming sun, this magic sought-
and found.
Copyright ©
invierno
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2014-09-04 17:37:56]
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Re: How bueatiful a New sun
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by nikkib on
Thursday, 4th September 2014 @ 06:55:46 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem. I liked it a lot. Appreciation is a lovely concept. |
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Re: How bueatiful a New sun
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 5th September 2014 @ 03:44:47 AM AEST
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Hi bud
Yes to appreciate makes us human. This is a stunning write. There are few things in life that are set in stone and a new day is one of them. The sum my very well not rise for you or I tomorrow but it will rise for someone. The new day is like a new born babe. We never know what it holds for us but it holds something. The question is what you will do with the days gifts or challenges. Now a sun rise is a beautiful thing no doubt and its beauty lies in its unknown and mystery, but the sun set can only be beautiful if you have grasped the day with both hands ridden it like a wild bull in a rodeo and got off the victor. However to be a victor does not necessary mean you got the gold. It means that you lived that day to the best of your ability and that you are satisfied that you gave your best that day. Blessings
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Re: How bueatiful a New sun
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th September 2014 @ 09:57:48 PM AEST
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splendid indeed... great poem my friend Inveirno,
absolutely a beauty!
The foot feels itself only when it touches the ground
someone said
I smiled reading this one
weeds grass flower dew
tangled up life full of stress
And then moments
Like this
Absolutely never better
than this
even with sorrow
Nothin' particular ---
such a perfect line
Peace!
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Re: How bueatiful a New sun
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 06:36:24 AM AEST
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truly beautifully penned, love the style flow and lay out,
hugs n' love nessa |
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