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Your wasting my miserable life
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Saturday, 13th September 2014 @ 10:00:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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No matter what you say
I know who you are
Easy
Freely
You give your body
Away
To anyone
At anytime
You call yourself free
I call you used
Have you ever
Taken a minute
To think about
Your future
Your family
Your children
I thought not
Just worked at the moment
Just what got you off
What gets you going
Makes you moan
Scream
Now the sheets
Need cleaning
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2014-09-13 22:00:22]
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Re: Your wasting my miserable life
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th September 2014 @ 10:54:17 PM AEST
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wow, this one makes me think it's about me
In my fifties and a hetero male
But I wasn't that lucky
"Scratched my head and
made myself a bet,
There's all these things I don't
remember, how lucky can one guy
get" I think it goes - John Prine
I lament too much when I forget to live
too big, has nothing to do with better
or worse, magnifying wasted time
forgetting how to count...
I like to become really small
Lot to think about here.
I think that makes it a great poem -
Hell a lot people read it
Peace! |
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