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Bubble Bath Boogie
Contributed by
softerware
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Sunday, 14th September 2014 @ 12:43:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Jump in the tub; time for a scrub!
Cellopane rainbows blub blub blub!
Little bare knees poke through the white down;
Ten toes for anchors ensure I dont drown!
Bobbing around with a glass full of grog;
Peering through steam; Im a ship in the fog.
Bottles and soap mark the distant shoreline;
Avast all ye mateys, into the brine!
Right through my fingers, the bar of soap sank;
I dive in to save her, (or else walk the plank)!
Man overboard! Toss me a line!
I swim to the sponge, and board just in time!
Paddling for life with my long-handled brush
Churning the waters in one foamy rush!
Gotta make shoreline before it gets dark!
Or suffer the wrath of the pink Camay shark!
The cannon are firing, the shampoos been hit;
Theyve boarded the cream rinse and sullied the mit!
I crawl up the sand dune and climb to the rug;
With my last burst of strength I pull out the plug!
The whirlpool ensues with a gurgling growl;
I watch them all sink in my shivering towel.
The villans have suffered the brunt of my wrath;
And I hereby proclaim (until my next bath)!
This vessel is sound for all ye who cower;
By trading the treacherous seas for a shower!
Copyright ©
softerware
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2014-09-14 12:43:13]
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Re: Bubble Bath Boogie
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by RussellReinhardt on
Sunday, 14th September 2014 @ 01:24:34 PM AEST
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Hi there Soft
What a pleasant poem. Took me back to my boyhood days when I use to play pirates in the bath. Lovely Lovely Lovely. Thank you for taking me back and putting a smile on my face. Blessings
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Rus |
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Re: Bubble Bath Boogie
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th September 2014 @ 08:17:09 PM AEST
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Hey Softerware, this is fun!
All the things you can do
Be pirate with long beard
Make a snowy gnome home
Thunderous waters crashing down
In anticipation of
There's no place like a tub
Peace! |
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Re: Bubble Bath Boogie
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th September 2014 @ 11:44:21 PM AEST
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Argh ye matey, I almost always trade the treacherous sea for a shower. :p
This was, as they say, "cute". It gave me a smile.
Thankies,
ARGH! |
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Re: Bubble Bath Boogie
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th September 2014 @ 08:10:20 AM AEST
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| This was an absolute delight to read!!! |
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