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I Wonder
Contributed by
avemaria
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Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I wonder how it would feel,
to be not me.
I wonder how it would feel,
just to be free.
I look in the mirror,
to see whats on the other side.
Maybe happiness,
Maybe pride.
I wish I could be you,
and you could be me.
To feel what I feel,
To see what I see.
But noone could be me.
Noone would try.
But I want them to feel what I feel.
Cry what I cry.
So won't you please,
enter my life.
See how it is,
See what it's like.
Copyright ©
avemaria
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2003-05-21 23:35:00]
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Re: I Wonder
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 05:31:43 AM AEST
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Ah yes.... we all wish for others to understand how we are feeling but, in truth, there is no way they ever can unless they have been there themsleves.
Great poem. I am sure a lot of people will be able to relate to it.
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Re: I Wonder
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 06:31:09 AM AEST
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I think I see a little bit of me in this. Great write! Blessed be,
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Re: I Wonder
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by Goebelclm73 on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 03:22:44 PM AEST
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Making people understand the feelings we have inside seems to be the hardest thing we can do. Especially if no one is listening, or no one seems to care. I can relate to this poem, it says so much concerning my present situation...makes me think. Keep writing, this is a great poem, and a good way to express yourself!!!
Christopher
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