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Cold and alone in the old feather duvet
Contributed by
Apollonia
on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 01:02:23 PM in AEST
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Cold on alone in the old feather duvet
Laying here wondering how time has passed
Where were people
And where was love
As I laid here I fell into a dream
Where wishes came true and love was real
As long as I've lived I havent doubted in love for a bit
But now as the night gets closer and darkness surrounds me Im not so sure
If love was real then why am I alone tonight?
Why are people crying as I sit here and repeat the tears from the waterfall of gold loving water
Love and anxiety is the new match
We cant control what we have never felt
Love was so close, so I thought
Love was so near to my heart, so I thought
But disappeared the day that I opened my eyes to the darkness and clarity
Ive been fooled and played around but still havent stopped believing
Tell me your story, tell me your sorrows and show me your future
Let me love you, let me stay tonight
Im only human but I havent lost my soul
Im still capable of loving, still capable of caring
Why cant you do the same?
All I need from someone is caring and someone to believe in me
Im full of anger and full of anxiety
I aint happy no more
The smile has slowly disappeared from my face even though I tried to keep it
Putting up a straight look to my face trying not to show them the damage that they made
Im only human I believed when you said that you love me
How can a best friend do this to her mate?
How can someone lie for so many years?
Im happy that I finally came to know the truth
Thanks for nothing
Thanks for making my doubt in love and people to trust
You cant trust anyone, thats what Ive learned for a little bit a life experience
But theres one thing I dont understand?
Then you cant trust me?
I know you can trust me or is that just a fantasy
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Apollonia
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2014-09-22 13:02:23]
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Re: Cold and alone in the old feather duvet
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 01:10:09 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings, love hurts, that's the truth,
but i would and did even tho pain is all i have there in that
spot of my heart, a void of memories............
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Cold and alone in the old feather duvet
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by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 01:42:55 PM AEST
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Hi there
I had this hole intellectual comment planed in my head as I was reading your poem. However all I actually want to say. Even though it's sad, don't give up on love. God bless
Greetings
Ru |
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Re: Cold and alone in the old feather duvet
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd October 2014 @ 10:57:31 PM AEST
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| I love this! The flow, and the emotions which you conveyed just makes the poem so powerful. This is truly a pleasure to read :) |
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Re: Cold and alone in the old feather duvet
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 3rd October 2014 @ 04:02:52 PM AEST
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It must be hard to keep on believing in something when so many times it has been trampled into the dirt.
I'm sure too many people have told you to keep on having faith and things will turn out the way you want.
Faith has to come from you though, not because someone tells you it should.
Fingers crossed that everything happens the way YOU want it to.
Steve |
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Re: Cold and alone in the old feather duvet
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th December 2014 @ 01:13:24 PM AEST
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| I trust you. |
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Re: Cold and alone in the old feather duvet
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by Socreights on
Sunday, 25th January 2015 @ 08:15:00 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Really love the use of the feather duvet as a metaphor for the futility of finding comfort from the desolation of the emotion. There is a strong pull to the rhythm of this poem. It is evocative of waters and currents which is further evocative - on account of the theme - of Ophelia drowning. A lot comes together to make a beautiful work. |
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Re: Cold and alone in the old feather duvet
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 13th March 2015 @ 10:37:02 PM AEST
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| Beautiful! |
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