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Stop leaving me to be with other men
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Sunday, 28th September 2014 @ 03:17:20 PM in AEST
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Cut me deep. With the secrets you could not keep . In your deep sleep, you dream of days that we will never see. Sunlight that will never shine . Your heart , your soul , your misery , will never be mine.
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Jyssvw22
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2014-09-28 15:17:20]
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Re: Stop leaving me to be with other men
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th September 2014 @ 12:07:10 AM AEST
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| It really enjoyed reading this! The assonance made the poem so powerful and emotional. And also I really liked the flow of the poem! |
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Re: Stop leaving me to be with other men
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by maluku on
Tuesday, 30th September 2014 @ 12:46:23 PM AEST
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| I really liked that :) |
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Re: Stop leaving me to be with other men
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 30th September 2014 @ 03:02:42 PM AEST
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Beautifully penned, Sir.
Keep it up.
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Re: Stop leaving me to be with other men
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by softerware on
Saturday, 4th October 2014 @ 08:41:29 PM AEST
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Astonishing that you have conveyed so much in so few words. A story distilled to its richest patina.
Wine to port. Such a gift for your readers!
softerware |
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