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Dreams
Contributed by
Amicus
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Sunday, 28th September 2014 @ 05:52:08 PM in AEST
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Theres a butcher in my town
And hes a little sad today
That there are problems in this world
That you cant pray away
And his wife shes a painter
Yeah the real artistic type
With frames of the starving
That cause all kinds of strife
The government tries to help
Or at least thats what they say
Branding us with numbers
To describe our personality
And the Priests tell us differently
The ways to live our lives
But who can say whats happy
Or distinguish faith from lies
Happiness is subjective
Dont force it upon others
But seek it fervently
And love all others
Copyright ©
Amicus
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2014-09-28 17:52:08]
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Re: Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th September 2014 @ 12:04:06 AM AEST
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| I really like this! Intriguing, thought provoking and also very well written. |
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Re: Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 29th September 2014 @ 01:53:14 PM AEST
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sweetly uplifting,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Dreams
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by maluku on
Tuesday, 30th September 2014 @ 12:40:14 PM AEST
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| I am absolute new-comer to poetry, but I know what I like. And I really liked this. The last two paragraphs (is that what you would call them?) especially connected with me. |
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Re: Dreams
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 30th September 2014 @ 02:59:27 PM AEST
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Intriguing read. Well laid out and thought provoking. I'm glad I read this, I enjoyed it immensely. Keep it up.
~Scorp |
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