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Embrace Expression
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
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Thursday, 2nd October 2014 @ 09:32:47 PM in AEST
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Ups and downs are no match for me
For my pen and paper in this battle will succeed
The heart is open yet the mind gated
That is until the completion of this poem long awaited
Again I shall embrace expression
Concealment abandoned and honesty employed
Confession is cleansing and writing thrilling
Altogether the process is absolutely fulfilling
Prepare for stories of conflict and harmony alike
All that create excitement and the senses strike
It's due time my potential resurface
After all my pen and paper have a purpose
Copyright ©
Deidra_Carmichael
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2014-10-02 21:32:47]
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Re: Embrace Expression
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by Invierno on
Friday, 3rd October 2014 @ 12:39:13 PM AEST
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Quite practical and true. Nicely done, my dear.
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Re: Embrace Expression
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by sanders on
Friday, 3rd October 2014 @ 01:16:09 PM AEST
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| very nice.....a satisfying read....liked it |
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Re: Embrace Expression
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 3rd October 2014 @ 03:25:01 PM AEST
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"The heart is open yet the mind gated"
One of those lines I wish I had written myself.
Lovely piece, you have a right to be proud.
Steve |
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Re: Embrace Expression
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 5th October 2014 @ 06:55:34 AM AEST
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penned so beautifully and true for all writers,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Embrace Expression
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 4th December 2014 @ 07:48:59 PM AEST
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Nicely done. I like you announcing yourself right from the first line, and the ending is almost a challenge to the reader.
The second stanza is my favourite.
~Scorp |
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