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Goodbye
Contributed by
mick
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Tuesday, 14th October 2014 @ 03:30:26 PM in AEST
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Do not help me,
do not show me what
there is to live for.
I'd rather not know what others
love, I just dont care
it was never me.
I tried to find who I was ment to be,
but always find failure.
If I am found with this note
then for once I have succeded,
to those who whished me dead
you're to slow, tell anyone who wants to
say goodbye I'll see you at the end.
Dont try and stop me,
for I am tired of proving no matter
what this never ends.
I've spent too much time being the rock
for other people.
How funny that a rock
now marks my crown.
In my polished little box.
Copyright ©
mick
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2014-10-14 15:30:26]
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Re: Goodbye
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 15th October 2014 @ 06:40:41 AM AEST
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Great job Mick. Being 'the rock' is not easy. I know, same as you. I wrote some poem a while back on this subject. "If They Only Knew" covers the same (for me, anyway) fear and instability I feel at having to be "The Man' for everyone all the time.
I really like this Mick. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Goodbye
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 15th October 2014 @ 04:35:06 PM AEST
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This is so sad, the ending just touched my heart so deeply.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Goodbye
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 19th October 2014 @ 07:45:47 PM AEST
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if purely artistic:: wicked good- tho if pouring of feelings- so sad, if you want to talk i'm here,
big hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Goodbye
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by ming on
Wednesday, 29th October 2014 @ 01:03:22 PM AEST
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Very intense and truth felt. Great poetry makes us feel. I feel you...
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