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Whispers
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Thursday, 16th October 2014 @ 05:19:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It begins as a slight buzzing sound
My ears strain to find its source
My mind spins as it searches around
I'm bombarded by its endless force
Whispers so soft with meanings unclear
Words meld and forge into a tight ball
I want to understand even as I fear
These messages written on time's wall
Whispers attacking from separate sides
I reach to grab one as it fades to black
Tears fall quietly as each whisper tries
To quickly drag my soul off life's track
Screams do nothing to end the assault
Can't run to escape dark demons at hand
Will the whispers explain why its my fault
Or have they succeeded within their plan
Are the whispers only sounds in my mind
Damages created from a past of disasters
Memories time won't let me leave behind
Doubtful I'll ever find any of the answers
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dvtpdw
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2014-10-16 17:19:05]
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Re: Whispers
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by fredmonte101 on
Saturday, 18th October 2014 @ 02:43:17 PM AEST
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| Had Post Traumatic Stress Disorder adn that sure reminds me of it. Well written. Thank you. |
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Re: Whispers
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th October 2014 @ 11:42:55 PM AEST
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Wow, very disturbing and scary. Marks of a great writer.
If this is a true story, hope you find your answers! ♥
Tim |
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Re: Whispers
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2014 @ 07:27:28 PM AEST
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How cool. You've tapped into my feelings here. Very evocative and drawing. Love it.
Invierno |
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