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Party of None
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Thursday, 30th October 2014 @ 12:56:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Stirred from dreams of a fleeting you-
Nowadays, those are far and few
The ticking time bomb of a clock.
Merchandised until out of stock
Do circumstances ever change?
Familiarity becomes strange-
Hopes pinned on one more stolen breath.
Amid binge vices chasing death
I'm still here for another round
Both feet planted firmly on ground
From this day I would like to flee-
Oh yeah; happy birthday to me.
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2014-10-30 12:56:52]
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Re: Party of None
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 30th October 2014 @ 11:43:54 PM AEST
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Familiarity becomes strange-(8) maybe 8, not sure
and
Both feet planted firmly on ground(8) pretty sure 9.
Also, Happy Birthday Scorp. Hope its a great one for a great poet |
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Re: Party of None
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st October 2014 @ 02:06:17 AM AEST
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When I initially read this, I had no words. I just looked at the screen and thought...aw. :( *teary eyed*
But you do indeed have "both feet planted firmly on ground!!!"
I can remember spending Christmas Eve alone. I remember someone yelling at me the day before my birthday and telling me what a loser I am. That type of stuff can make these days worse but our content of character keeps us a goin'! You rock and I rock. Life can suck be we keep pushin. Writing helps too.
Keepa a writin' and keepa rockin'.
And happy anniversary celebrating your grand enrty into this world! |
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Re: Party of None
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by Invierno on
Friday, 31st October 2014 @ 08:14:08 AM AEST
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I feel this. Well done. Sad for you though; it's a crappy way to feel, but a feeling nonetheless. You've done an expert job capturing that.
Invierno |
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Re: Party of None
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 31st October 2014 @ 03:13:42 PM AEST
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first of all warm happiest birthday wishes, and
wow and wow, what a write!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Party of None
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 1st November 2014 @ 09:37:00 AM AEST
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Hey there
Happy birthday to you have a kick ass one my friend. I'm a trucker and have spent countless months and even years alone. Never nice be it by choice or by slice. None the less not nice. I truly hope you get to spend time with people that you matter to. God bless
Greetings
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Re: Party of None
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd November 2014 @ 02:24:29 PM AEST
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A sad day for melancholia to rear its head, but you capture it so well. Hey, I know that room, that screen, that keyboard, and those binge vices. Writing is a lonely business at the best of times , guess it has to be that way.
Grand write, as always, Scorpers, and a belated happy birthday from me. |
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