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Ablution
Contributed by
Amicus
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Thursday, 6th November 2014 @ 03:22:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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I was just baptized
By the falling rain
Clothes soaked sticky
They ran down the
Hidden creases and wrinkles
I've yet to find
I thought I could
Taste it, sickly sweet
But I had bitten
A hole in my cheek
Tongue the bleeding
And forget about the rain
My body damp, it changed
To a cold snowflake
It slowly passes by
And with a hesitant look
I taste the salty shame
Copyright ©
Amicus
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2014-11-06 15:22:30]
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Re: Ablution
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Saturday, 8th November 2014 @ 10:26:30 AM AEST
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| Yes, many of us become so fixated on the past that it can become our future. But like you said, if we rid ourselves of ourselves, it becomes possible to have a better future. I look forward to more of your work. Take good care. |
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