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Marsh Rat
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 11:24:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Forget me shoes, grab my hat A mouse is prowling, set the trap Trying to catch fish, taking their nap, I'm a certified, all star marsh rat.
Not concerned, about rain coming, It's the tides, tell me what's running, Small rumble, can't be thunder You can catch me, bobbing flounder
Don't care about deer,or angry steer Jumping on the boat in high gear, Hopping out, toes in sand Wishing and digging, for some clams
Forget my shoes, grab my hat A mouse is prowling, set the trap Trying to catch fish, taking their nap, I'm a certified, all star marsh rat.
Water rising, reverse recede glancing around, what do I need? Boats abound, a slow bite Floating crab pot, a dog fight.
Sun setting, blue soup in mug Shaking my head, for Foxy's hung A step to the left, and one to right Trusty line broken, in for the night
Forget my shoes, grab my hat A mouse is prowling, set the trap Trying to catch fish, taking their nap, I'm a certified, all star marsh rat.
And for supper, no restaurants Just anything, whatever you want Whitey and blue, welk or conk Or boiling crab, on hot tongs
Head hits pillow, soon I dream Close to my Honda, beer in reach Kids to raise, mouths to feed without shoes, salt water I bleed.
Forget my shoes, grab my hat A mouse is prowling, set the trap Trying to catch fish, taking their nap, I'm a certified, all star marsh rat.
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2014-11-07 11:24:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Marsh Rat
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 11:48:21 AM AEST (User
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first of all warm welcome to ypdc:) beautiful style, flow
and imagery here, i look forward to more from you,
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Marsh Rat
(User Rating: 1 ) by Beyfoxman5 on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 11:55:44 AM AEST (User
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Thank you for your kind words. I will keep writing. |
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Re: Marsh Rat
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 12:54:51 PM AEST (User
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Very catchy. Flows just like a song I can almost hear. I like the unhurried pace and natural imagery this conjured up in my mind.
~Scorp |
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