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Without
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 02:27:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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To me, people they are like sheep
Green resonates in people's brains
And deprives them of sleep
But the doe-re-me
Ain't nothin' to a man
From the country
Life today seems to be so fast
Dueling and harping on the past
Do we realize a thousand pasts
Means no future
And so that's why
Expensive jeans
And mounds of green
I am with without
A high-rise in the city
Ain't to me so pretty
Cars, and jewels
As great as they may seem
These things I am without
She begged me for shiny new heels
Size six and a half
Say hey honey
Let's do the math
A barefoot you revs my engine
Than any hot catch
From here to high heaven
I wish once again
For the first time we could meet
And then two people
Could have a single heart beat
Expensive jeans
And mounds of green
I am without
A high rise in the city
To me, ain't so pretty
Cars, and jewels
As great as they may seem
These things I am without
It's so funny
Feel the irony
Want less and be rich
And you'll feel like a million bucks
Copyright ©
Beyfoxman5
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2014-11-07 14:27:07]
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Re: Without
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 02:47:19 PM AEST
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i totally agree, less is more in my case too, been rich/been
poor- got the t-shirt, i'm happy now in my simple forest life,
some beautiful expressive writing here:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Without
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 03:26:51 PM AEST
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A fool is soon separated from his money. ;) Good job conveying that message. Everything worth living for is a direct result of our actions, and no amount of money can come by that honestly.
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Re: Without
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 8th November 2014 @ 06:31:55 AM AEST
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I think there is a tendency these days to assume money is god. It drives people and sometimes they miss the true worth of life.
You've illustrated that so well here in your words.
Persue the real value of life, that's the message I'm taking from this.
Nice work
Steve |
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Re: Without
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by kmec1990 on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 12:53:48 PM AEST
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A lesson learned with age I think, the older I get the more I appreciate the things that come without a price tag. Excellent write.
K |
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