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Smoke and Mirrors
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Saturday, 8th November 2014 @ 11:37:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I must insist,
So hard to resist
A cease and desist
Clenched with a fist
I fall back on your knife-
Unequivocal strife
A surrendered life
Where cruelty is rife
I love you despite,
Your words that ignite
My brawler to fight
Blackness from light
Like sheep to a shepherd
Spots to a leopard,
Images doctored,
Fantasies conjured.
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2014-11-08 11:37:35]
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 8th November 2014 @ 10:24:59 PM AEST
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I fall back on your knife-
Unequivocal strife
A surrendered life
Where cruelty is rife
Your poetry is amazing, and this is why. Coming from a hypocrite, you know you don't have to stay there.
I love you despite,
Your words that ignite
My brawler to fight
Blackness from light
My brawler to fight...holy crap that line, that one line. you are truly amazing. very well done girl |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by softerware on
Saturday, 8th November 2014 @ 11:47:03 PM AEST
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"I love you despite, your words that ignite!"
You said that right for sure. Passion and love are inseparable. You have made a salient point: the opposite of love it not hate; it is apathy.
Well penned! (again!)
softerware |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by sanders on
Sunday, 9th November 2014 @ 08:47:22 AM AEST
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Oooh what lines..
"I fall back on your knife...
Your words that ignite...
Blackness from light "
Very good Scorp. |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th November 2014 @ 10:02:03 AM AEST
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your muse sure is 'alive and kicking' lol, what are you
feeding it? things aren't always what they seem, aye?
hugs n' love nessa, |
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