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Observe
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
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Sunday, 9th November 2014 @ 08:12:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Observe
Two eyes, one mouth
Observe
Don't think out loud
Observe
So much we can learn
Observe
Soon, you'll barrel the curve
Observe
Verbal bondage has no place
Observe
This is not a race
Observe
No need to make ears bleed
Observe
Again, no such thing as a lead
Observe
Be all you can be
Observe
Touch, smell,taste, hear, look....and SEE
Observe
The way that tree bends
Observe
Chicks in the pen
Observe
Leaves falling off the trees
Observe
See what you see
Observe
The tantalizing sunset
Observe
Much is far from over yet
Observe
The rocks and sand
Observe
Our beautiful everywhere land
Observe
The dock could be hollow
Observe
Water could be shallow
Observe
You own what you see
Observe
Your thoughts, tell me
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Re: Observe
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by sanders on
Sunday, 9th November 2014 @ 08:30:54 AM AEST
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This is nice and interesting...
really we can learn and feel a lot through observing...
and you just expressed it with great finesse. |
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Re: Observe
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 9th November 2014 @ 11:39:52 AM AEST
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Wait...I think I got the message. Put blinders on? ;)
Just kidding, but I do like the relentless "observe" message. It starts off slow and then quickly snowballs into a powerful message. Take in the details, enjoy the little things, study the big things, and keep an open mind. Nice job!
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