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the darkness in the darkness
Contributed by
Jigget
on
Wednesday, 12th November 2014 @ 10:56:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the darkness in the darkness.
it's just a bad idea and no matter the day
it's a nice shot of me, grinning blank at those who pray
it's all random happenstance and gravity and days of gray
it's a tune without the moon and it's a path that's lost it's way
it's a whisper gone unheard and a scream that dreams of life
it's a wonder, wandering, sauntering by dressed in sparkly bright
it's a darkness in the darkness that makes blackness look like white
it's a beautiful catastrophy, a poisonous delight
it's a miracle that died at birth in wide-eyed disbelief
it's a nightmare in the daylight and it's sharpening it's teeth
it's a crime within a smile like a murderer's relief
it's a horrible rejoicing and it's feeding on good grief
it's a hallucinating illusion that never magic tricked
it's a reason for uneasy, it's eternal and it's sick
it's a choice that seems so obvious but it's sneaky and it's quick
it's a chance that needs a second glance like Tock depends on Tick
J. Howell
2008
Copyright ©
Jigget
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Re: the darkness in the darkness
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by sanders on
Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 02:27:52 AM AEST
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Each and every line of this piece of poetry
is itself addicting...
reading through each stanza
feels like a falling into a trance
deepening....
"it's a path that's lost it's way"
"it;s a beautiful catastrophe , a poisonous delight"
and many more such awesome lines...
but the best one...
"it's a darkness in the darkness that makes blackness look like white"
You are "one of a kind"
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Re: the darkness in the darkness
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 09:56:37 AM AEST
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such a brilliant vivid tangible write, excellent images, you
have captured every aspect, beautifully beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: the darkness in the darkness
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by thezenmonkey on
Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 02:23:02 PM AEST
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Entrancing write you've got talent!
this writing has kinda a hypnotic effect and is very very clever! |
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Re: the darkness in the darkness
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 17th November 2014 @ 11:26:38 AM AEST
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Mesmerizing. Good descriptives. Exquisite opposition in each line. I must read again!
Keep it up.
~Scorp |
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