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Rage filled heart
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 05:29:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My heart is locked in a powerful cage
its been sent there to rot, and stew in its rage
Its captor is merciless and benevolent with glee,
I hope that its captor will take pity on me.
I once loved its captor with each inch of my being
I saw him for what he was without me seeing
He had a kind and gentle soul, always taking his time with me
until that fateful day, when he took my heart and it screamed like a banshee.
My heart hates him now with a burning passion
as for me, I can spare him no ration
I want my heart back, and I want it back today
and I can be sure, that I'll walk away
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FireStarter
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2014-11-13 17:29:59]
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Re: Rage filled heart
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 07:21:59 PM AEST
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| So sorry you were hurt. I can relate. This is an impressive piece. You have a special talent. |
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Re: Rage filled heart
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 10:50:39 AM AEST
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a strong beautifully penned write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Rage filled heart
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 27th February 2019 @ 03:34:03 AM AEST
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That first stanza is golden. The rest just as powerful.
Great writing!!! |
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