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A Dance In the stars.
Contributed by
weemick
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Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 08:42:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your hand softly falls Into Mine
We both stand In the divine
Upon a floor of brilliant stars
Then we here ghostly guitars
They play their music soft and low
As our feet move so slow
I take you gently In my arms
Your grace one of your Angelic charms
Starlight glitters In your hair
We move so gently without a care
You smile a smile so divine
We move as one keeping the time
Your beauty on a night like this
Is greater than the stars that kiss
Your glory as you dance with me
Through God's ancient timeless sea
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weemick
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2014-11-14 20:42:00]
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Re: A Dance In the stars.
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 10:12:17 PM AEST
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Lovely imagery!! I almost heard the music while watching you dance!
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Re: A Dance In the stars.
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 15th November 2014 @ 02:07:27 PM AEST
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this is sooo beautiful and romantic! with every consecutive
line one happily falls more deeply into the poem, and then
when we're swooning- you give us:: the ancient timeless sea !!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A Dance In the stars.
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 18th November 2014 @ 11:49:18 AM AEST
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Beautiful images you set forth.I felt as I was dancing along.Lovely write.Welcome to YPDC. Have a great day and keep sharing:)
Michelle |
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