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Broken Girl
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A broken girl
Is what she left of me
Down on the floor
With the something you saw in me
I lost myself
And left it all behind
Till you gave me
Something I never thought I'd find
I learned to stand up on my own
But all the hurt inside me took a hold
I put up these defensive walls
To guard my heart against the bitter cold
I took a look in the mirror
Realized I'm not who I wanted to be
I wanted that little girl back
'Cause this girl doesn't cry - that can't be me!
This broken girl
Found a kindred spirit
I saw myself
In every tear and knew it fit
I found myself
Even when it hit me
Of what I did
And of just how bad she hurt me
I locked myself away inside
Hiding and crying within my own head
One tiny light among the dark
And I felt her in every tear I shed
So I set out to find the key
That special someone who would set me free
But I just couldn't seem to fit
Right in my own skin with anybody
A broken heart
Is what was left of me
Down on my luck
So I took what you offered me
You loved this girl
But I didn't see how
Then I fell too
And was amazed at what I found
Love echoed in my ears so loud
I knew I finally had something real
When I stepped back to take a look
I realized with you I could just be me
And no longer did I feel lost
'Cause beautiful you, you love me for me
Now because of you I feel whole
That little girl is free and this is me
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-05-22 21:05:00]
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Re: Broken Girl
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by savannah on
Sunday, 25th May 2003 @ 07:41:15 PM AEST
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| Wow! This is such an amazing poem, and it describes perfectly how I felt when I lost two of my best friends, gained two soulmates in the form of other best friends, and found my boyfriend. I couldn't have loved it more! |
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Re: Broken Girl
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by yellow_sundragon on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 06:52:48 PM AEST
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D.... if I had known.... I would never have let Sam near you...
This is beautifyl... and I am crying... and.... and this is so sad... you never write sad poems... no fair! now I have to write a happy one to even it out!!
*J* |
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Re: Broken Girl
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by LadyDama on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 04:59:20 AM AEST
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| i love poems that reflect on our lives and tell a little story of a piece of lives,,, this was excellent... blessings... |
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