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New Paths
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
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Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 06:44:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Can you love someone you have never met but admire?
With only shared language,
Thoughts and emotions.
Mingle in mystique
And it's a fire of elusive desire.
Frustrated years
Turning to bloom into new musings.
Because of new inspiration,
She is a new exhilaration.
Can I annihilate my inhibitions,
Without half-hearted reservations.
Reserving my inclinations for another time,
I fear would be a mistake.
Let passion take over
Where once I was weak
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deadreckoning1983
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2014-12-01 06:44:22]
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Re: New Paths
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 10:14:32 AM AEST
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You really are onto some new musings these days...I think a fresh approach to anything is never a bad idea. It helps us grow, it keeps our enemies guessing, it makes life livelier...As for the question in the beginning, it seems to be a common pondering around here, lol. We are sensitive creatures who get moved by other, similar creatures. Words are powerful, as you recently stated. I suppose that is for you and your respective parties to figure out, but a little inspiration never hurt anyone.
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Re: New Paths
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 01:34:22 PM AEST
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Can you love someone you have never met but admire?
Yes, I believe we can.
Many questions here aimed at oneself. I say read those last two lines and go for it!
Nicely done,
Tim
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Re: New Paths
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by Archie on
Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 04:33:37 PM AEST
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To say that I like your style is an understatement. You have a very evocative poem here. This reminds me of one of my favorite songs by Alicia Keyes
". . .Continuous mistakes I known I've made before. How long will I feel so out of place. . ."
Excerpt from 'Troubles' By Alicia Keyes |
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Re: New Paths
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 05:28:14 PM AEST
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inspiring... like taking the leap hoping you'll land on your
feet! ...sometimes we just simply have to follow our hearts,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: New Paths
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by jyssvw22 on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 12:43:00 PM AEST
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| nicely done. There is no mistaking what message you are sending . The resader roots for you and wishes you luck in love . |
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Re: New Paths
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 08:48:41 PM AEST
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Good question! Whether or not, your musings are insightful and empowering. Giving yourself permission to follow passion instead of propriety.
You write with passion; why not live with it as well?
You will have great stories to tell. |
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Re: New Paths
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 07:32:11 AM AEST
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"Reserving my inclinations for another time,
I fear would be a mistake.
Let passion take over
Where once I was weak"
If your actions do no harm to others, then heck YES! Go for it!
I like your poem friend DR
Invierno
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