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Freedom as a bunny
Contributed by
pawaustin23
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Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 11:01:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A Bunny as free as a butterfly,
Hopping this way and that,
Without a care in the world,
He flits here and there.
Chasing visions of carrots,
With lettuce all along the way.
He lives yet still another day,
Free to roam the grassy fields.
Seeking for prey,
The hunter's eyes searched the field
Until they settled on the lone rabbit,
That was sitting in the midst of the brush.
As the bunny looks up,
He senses a threat to his livelihood.
Scurrying along, he darts quickly
into the burrow and once again is safe.
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pawaustin23
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2014-12-02 11:01:26]
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Re: Freedom as a bunny
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by dvtpdw on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 05:21:50 PM AEST
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| Your words paint a vivid picture and one can see the action as you read along. Very creative and enjoyable write, P |
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Re: Freedom as a bunny
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 01:57:00 AM AEST
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You wrote this in a way that you took me inside the verse. I am so happy the bunny hid and was safe too:) Nicely done.
Hug hug
Michelle |
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Re: Freedom as a bunny
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th December 2014 @ 12:09:13 PM AEST
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warm welcome to ypdc, this is beautiful, i'm happy he
made it to safety!
hugs n' love nessa |
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