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Forgotten
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Tuesday, 9th December 2014 @ 06:44:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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There is a man standing at a beach
All by his lonesome
He has an objective, a mission of sorts
He wishes to be remembered
So he invokes a malicious act
He won't be remembered for his life
So he casts forth a ball of fire toward the stars
To be remembered for a smear on the canvas
The heavens swirl and mix
Losing all recognition
The constellations of days of old
No longer serve as guides
He is a painter of a grim illustration
He could not paint an illusion of life
So instead he developed
An abstract form of destruction
The world had changed as well
Mountains crumbled and hills had split
The oceans roared and seas changed red
The sky had a darkness placed in its stead
What were once aquatic inhabitants
Were now decorations of riverbeds
Castles formed and towers fell
For some change is hell
And it seemed it was for him as well
He no longer recognized his home
And was cast away
Exiled from the world
To be left behind in history
Still alone
And in all senses of the word
Forgotten
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Re: Forgotten
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Tuesday, 9th December 2014 @ 07:31:37 PM AEST
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The imagery, among many things in this poem is powerful. I appreciate your comments on my recent poem. Your mother will always live on in you.
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Re: Forgotten
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 18th December 2014 @ 09:31:40 AM AEST
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interesting and the images are excellent, so if i'm understanding
this right- he caused a rip in the universe yet the world carried on...
hugs n' love nessa |
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