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The Death of Chivalry
Contributed by
SylviaHughes
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Saturday, 20th December 2014 @ 06:20:49 PM in AEST
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Corrupted sweat
classless jungle of bodies
I am buried
Conscience high
pitched under breath
The chivalrous giants
trample and deafen you
Well-mannered pigs
A touch and transaction
On my way now
On your way, your way
Brash disillusion
You devoured me!
The roses still
Insignificant mess
It drips, drips
Often forgotten
Still present hills
Admiring the view
The avalanche trills
Eternal as snow
It drips, drips
Copyright ©
SylviaHughes
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2014-12-20 18:20:49]
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Re: The Death of Chivalry
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th December 2014 @ 06:53:12 PM AEST
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And they slaughtered them all. Until they knew, and then they cut off their bow-fingers. But then they knew, and chivalry wasn dead. Long live Agincourt!!!
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Re: The Death of Chivalry
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th December 2014 @ 08:00:15 PM AEST
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| My god, it drips, and only if you could feel the hunger of your snow. You'd run before the avalanche, like a well-mannered pig. |
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Re: The Death of Chivalry
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th December 2014 @ 11:25:53 PM AEST
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I like this
I feel caught within it
Not sure I know what it means
I might feel certain
Neither do they
I feel I never knew what noble man
or women once felt
Your words are haunting and
beautifully distancing just now
from some past that seems dead
Thank you!
Peace! |
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Re: The Death of Chivalry
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by shelby on
Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 01:49:41 AM AEST
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Wow I must admit the title and the poem itself caught me off gaurd. I must agree though, most days I am left scratching my head with world goings ons lol.............Well written and deep verse
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Re: The Death of Chivalry
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by ming on
Tuesday, 23rd February 2016 @ 01:28:25 PM AEST
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Wow! I/'/m glad I came & read your poems. You rock it loud & clear.
ming |
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