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Resurrect
Contributed by
Breezy
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Monday, 22nd December 2014 @ 10:18:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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≈≈ *** ≈ ≈
Do you hear the resuscitation--
the mild beating of the will to love?
Im sure that was far longer than 3 minutes and yet ...
oh yes - the brain was never deprived.
Youre smile was always so quiet
a breeze would have seemed thunderous
in comparison
I could melt into it so easily
(would you let me?)
Countless moments in shadowed wait
Never impetuous, always uncomplaining
Was it calculated? Did you feel it too?
Kindred, you and I
and here we are again ...
Yet still timorous, still unsure
Clarity is a singular gift
Rip open the wrapping; discover the treasure
you know is there
I promise I will not resist
I would be open even to just a kiss ...
≈≈ *** ≈≈
Copyright ©
Breezy
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2014-12-22 22:18:02]
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Re: Resurrect
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd December 2014 @ 10:28:44 PM AEST
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He'd let you. I'd bet money on it and that's not what I have a lot of!
I like it, yes indeedy, me likes.
Side note: Pssst There's another word with my name in it. Don't tell Scorp. ;-)
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Re: Resurrect
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by shelby on
Monday, 22nd December 2014 @ 11:30:11 PM AEST
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Where have you been all my life chicky?Sure have missed you. Now as I have finished reading this Im awestruck once more and melting into a puddle:) Beautifullllllllllllll
hugs and love you and miss you too lots
Michelle |
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Re: Resurrect
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2014 @ 04:21:13 AM AEST
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Melting into Love,
Excellent. |
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Re: Resurrect
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by Tiny_Tina on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2014 @ 10:05:25 PM AEST
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| Soooo impressive! |
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Re: Resurrect
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 27th December 2014 @ 03:50:18 PM AEST
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Holy jackpot, Batman !!!!
Talk about a thunderous breeze... You little Miracle on 34th Street, you! Okay I am getting carried away, but how can I not? What an unexpected surprise to come to your account and see a *BRAND, SPANKING NEW* write from you!
This is a great write, and welcome back. I love your voice here, a touch of "speak softly and carry a big stick" a la Teddy Roosevelt. (P.s another Scorp). In other words, you packed a big punch in a most Breezalicious way. Your subtle, yet sultry wordplay is still on point, and I love the unwrapping of a gift comparison.
Oh, and TIMorous. Nice! ;)
~Scorp
(Thrilled to see you posting)
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Re: Resurrect
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 27th December 2014 @ 11:46:27 PM AEST
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| ooh sexy poetry, my favorite kind. This was lustful and mysterious. I loved every single line |
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Re: Resurrect
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 29th December 2014 @ 09:25:04 PM AEST
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truly beautiful! great to see you posting kiddo! happy holidays!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Resurrect
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by Jecks on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2019 @ 04:13:34 PM AEST
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| ahh there`s that HR I was talking about. Thjis represents what I remember best about you. I look forward to catching up on more! |
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