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bleeding
Contributed by
FireStarter
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Monday, 22nd December 2014 @ 11:40:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Your lies cut deep more than they should
right to the core, it'll bleed if it could
The cut grows deeper as I grow more weary
the tears come more freely as my world goes bleary
I can't see a thing in this world of mine
you took my heart and you crossed the line
Your telling it lies and making it bleed
I want you to let it go so it can be freed
You stab and you stab with the lies that you tell
you say, "I won't ever hurt you, please don't yell."
The strength of my heart beams real dim
I wish it could die on a single whim
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FireStarter
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2014-12-22 23:40:26]
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Re: bleeding
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by kmec1990 on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2014 @ 01:57:32 PM AEST
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Wow, excellent write I could almost feel the knife. Unfortunately I can relate all to well they say time heals all wounds butnthats simply insnt true some things can't be fixed you just learn to live with them.
Blessings
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Re: bleeding
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Wednesday, 24th December 2014 @ 09:51:05 AM AEST
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This is powerful, super meaningful, and relatable.
The strength of my heart beams real dim. Wow!
Best,
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Re: bleeding
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by Davinah on
Saturday, 27th December 2014 @ 01:03:09 AM AEST
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This brought back so many (bad) memories...
Great powerful poem!
I could really feel the anguish and the hurt.
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