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Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
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Thursday, 1st January 2015 @ 04:14:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Will this smoke inhilation
Clear the confusion
That is my current state
It seems there's no one
To which I can relate
I have no answers
A fire burns
As my world turns
From clear to overcast
The rain comes
I go blank
I have no answers
I decide to swim
And 15 strokes in
I begin to drown
Bottom bound
I have no answers
For the moment I am saved
By the green grass I have found
Ha, sprinklers surround
I should have known
It wasn't a concert that filled my ears
For it was only a drone
I have no answers
Only time will tell
If I will escape this state
Of living hell
Where can I buy a gasoline suit?
I have no answers
And with another drag I thrive, a chance
I am alive
Will I survive, advance?
This present tense
Makes no sense
Out there, is there an answer?
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Re: Answers
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 1st January 2015 @ 09:39:38 PM AEST
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You write, therefore you will survive.
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Re: Answers
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by softerware on
Saturday, 3rd January 2015 @ 10:35:06 AM AEST
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Ah, your burning quest reminds me of my younger days, and I reached the end of your poem, and true to the medium, forgot what the question was!
Thank you for a moment of nostalgia.
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Re: Answers
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 4th January 2015 @ 09:16:44 AM AEST
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I think we are kin
Well said! |
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