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Be My Superman
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 07:43:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Tie me up but don't blindfold me
You're the only one but I need to see clearly
Touch me but don't pressure me
I want you to know me but with time
Kiss me but don't love me
I want you to care but I get scared
Undress me but don't expect too much
My exposed naked soul isn't flawless
Be with me but give me space
I need breathing room and my friends too
Stay with me but give me time
I need to take this slow so be patient
Talk to me but don't make me open up
I won't break down my defenses in a day
Be a shoulder but don't make me dependent
I need you but you can't be my reason to live
Laugh with me but take me seriously
I need to know my feelings matter to you
Listen to me but don't judge me
Remember there's more than one side to me
Be my rock but have a heart
Don't think being strong means not being sensitive
Be careful with me but don't expect me to break
I hurt easily but that doesn't mean I'm weak
Be my Superman but take some time just to be
You don't always have to hold me up
If you want, I can tie you up too
I'll be whatever you need me to be
You don't have to do anything to make me happy
Being you is all you have to do
Don't ever feel you should change yourself
I didn't fall for you coz I thought you were someone else
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MoonlitAngel
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Re: Be My Superman
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by ginsdance on
Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 07:47:26 PM AEST
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So true! And men think that we are hard to please!!! This is a beautiful poem... you can feel the love in it. Great write!
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Re: Be My Superman
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by lil_hummingbird on
Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 09:55:59 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this one... great write! |
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Re: Be My Superman
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by chatabox on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 03:32:55 AM AEST
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I know exactly what you mean, now if only the men understood too........
great write, loved this. |
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Re: Be My Superman
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 04:15:44 AM AEST
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| LOL...finally someone wrote the manual on pleasing women...I bet all those men will be glad to finally have it LOL!!! Great poem |
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Re: Be My Superman
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by markymark on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 06:42:55 AM AEST
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| Well done, what a great read, so well put down, you done a crackin job here...now i know what women like hmmmm... thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece with us, it was my pleasure to read it...take care...Mark x |
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Re: Be My Superman
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by Emmie74 on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 01:22:05 PM AEST
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Hey, great poem.... Im sure he'll treat you right... He's already done a great job in the starting... Hehe...............
Love always
~Em |
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Re: Be My Superman
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by POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 08:44:05 PM AEST
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VERY VERY PRETTY AND SO TRUE JUST KEEP THE POEMS COMIN AND MAKE THEM AS GOOD AS THIS ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ALMOST PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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