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Missionary
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Wednesday, 7th January 2015 @ 03:34:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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An honest man
Speaks from the mirror
His reflections
Illusions of horror
Interpreted
Fragile tones
Flow outwardly
Accepted
Unintentionally
Rejected
Cemented, into
Concrete terms
Here it is
Watch it burn
Burned
Feeble mindedness
A nibble of frost
No hope is lost
When faith is tossed
Towards a heavily ghost
I see stars
Prayers reach
Far from speech
Humans keep
Colors deep
Inside the mist
Intimate dreams
A fantasy
Come true
Here I am
On
Top
Of
You
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw22
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2015-01-07 15:34:16]
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Re: Missionary
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by Alphas0z on
Wednesday, 7th January 2015 @ 05:22:08 PM AEST
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| Quite a new unique poem. Not many people use that kind of structure. I like it. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Missionary
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 8th January 2015 @ 11:54:13 AM AEST
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Incredible work. You do wield a certain mastery of this format, but this feels like a growth spurt (bonus). I found a certain eeriness to some word choices, for lack of a better word, but it added to the impact overall.
Always a treat to see a new submission from you.
Happy new year, jyss. All the best in 2015.
~Scorp |
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