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Some Sick Romantic Picture Of Myself
Contributed by
Invierno
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Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 01:27:38 PM in AEST
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Some Sick romantic picture of myself-
six feet above, hovering like a damn demon
seeing through whiskeyed eyes
a silly version in my mind
of majestic tragedy-
when reality is a shot glass and sordid past,
a cigarette grasp and hazy smoke;
a joke, really, to me, even now
as I seek somehow
to find a majesty not there;
ephemeral and fleeting as carcinogenic air.
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Invierno
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2015-01-10 13:27:38]
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Re: Some Sick Romantic Picture Of Myself
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by kmec1990 on
Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 05:00:59 PM AEST
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More self reflection, you have a beautiful way with words even with difficult topics. Another great wrote
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Re: Some Sick Romantic Picture Of Myself
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 08:45:16 PM AEST
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cosmic rationalizing
like a cavity that sticks
and the appointment with
the dentist
I might forget
before it gets big
Oh the "some sick romantic picture of myself"
how it comes and goes, and oozes
For me, I see it in the eyes of someone else
I see me sometimes the way I might just be
How do you go back, when you can't.
But that's it
it's the Cosmic discovery
that at first really sucks
Cool write my man!
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Re: Some Sick Romantic Picture Of Myself
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 4th April 2015 @ 12:05:32 PM AEST
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I like your style
I'm not much for a bunch of BS fluff.
I'm not reading a story but a poem.
So I'm a fan!
You have a special talent for seeing what others can not! |
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