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Six Feet of Separation
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Monday, 12th January 2015 @ 12:50:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In the spirit of forgiveness
I forgive myself.
For allowing your penetration,
With a desperate resignation,
Handing over the key-
Stupefied via carnal glee
Pandora's box; it now sits unlocked
Sins purged, karma is clobbered and clocked
Spirited away by dark force,
The devils' prized workhorse
Stamping hooves tramp to oblivion,
Self-loathing borders barbarian
Meek resistance flounders
Spiritual intervention sought-
Survival allotted to the brave
But you must pull yourself from the grave.
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hauntedscorp
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2015-01-12 12:50:50]
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Re: Six Feet of Separation
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th January 2015 @ 01:23:34 PM AEST
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Write it out, my Scorpendous friend!!!! WRITE IT OUT!!!!
Karma clobbered and clocked
too cool. |
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Re: Six Feet of Separation
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 12th January 2015 @ 08:43:25 PM AEST
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we always get up when we're knocked down
the dark ones will never win........ |
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Re: Six Feet of Separation
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by xHeathenx on
Tuesday, 13th January 2015 @ 04:02:44 PM AEST
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I wonder, if in a case like this, assuming, I'm right when it comes to subject matter, or premise; Is the force really so dark, or is that how it's seen, because we are let-down, but refuse to see it as anything but, because of our pain.
With a mind as open as we can make it, we can fit so many new things, including the ability to see all things from as many perspectives as possible, but the only problem with that, is I've made peace with seeing so many different perspectives, that I forget my own, and it's harder to know how I feel. |
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Re: Six Feet of Separation
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 16th January 2015 @ 05:18:17 AM AEST
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But you must pull yourself from the grave.
Truer words have never been penned. Moments of seflish indulgence greeted with regret. I know thee well |
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Re: Six Feet of Separation
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by kmec1990 on
Friday, 23rd January 2015 @ 05:54:12 AM AEST
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No one controls the essence of who you are but you, it cant be taken only given. Stay strong! Another excellent and emotional write
Hugs
K |
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Re: Six Feet of Separation
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 23rd January 2015 @ 08:50:52 AM AEST
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| ((((Scorp)))) Been awhile since I've been here. Found myself really needing the poetry again. Great write, my friend. |
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Re: Six Feet of Separation
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 16th February 2015 @ 09:47:57 AM AEST
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a great positive message for all; as we all must keep going! beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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