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Inappropriate Monologue
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
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Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 05:14:44 PM in AEST
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As I sit here alone
I drift into my zone
A word vomit parade
A tongue-lashing tirade
Against myself
Degrading myself in my chair
A hole into my soul I tear
I might stand around five feet ten
But according self-defacing words, I belong in a play pen
But why?
Why be so hard on myself
Inappropriate monologue, to the shelf
I'm done with this self-deprecating drill
If I don't believe in myself, no one else will
Inappropriate monologue, to the past
Come back for a second, I'll kick your ---
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2015-01-15 17:14:44]
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Re: Inappropriate Monologue
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 05:29:54 PM AEST
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| That's the spirit! Find that confidence! Find that self-appreciation, that self-love! Without, you can't truly love another well. :) |
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Re: Inappropriate Monologue
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 07:01:41 PM AEST
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Waddup?! Good stuff here! I like raw words...to much polish isn't always the shiniest.
Dude, or Dudette, I have been (still am to a lesser degree of late) in your state. It sucks, but sometimes the only silver lining is you can bet your a** it won't last. Something good will happen.
Keep writing. It is very cathartic for me. I can tell it will help you.
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Re: Inappropriate Monologue
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by softerware on
Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 08:49:05 PM AEST
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There is greatness in us all. The gift you bring in your words is to aspire. Until you can believe it, no one else will.
Why do the old tapes play when they are no longer valid? Habit? Comfort zone? The pain that makes us feel at home.
Bravo for reminding us so cleverly that if we keep doing what we have always done…we will keep getting what we have always got!
I like your new recipe! Bon appetite!
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Re: Inappropriate Monologue
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 11:32:54 PM AEST
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We are all our own worse critics. I really like this poem. Keepa a writin' and don't beat yourself up.
Psst, a little secret...it's okay to say ass here. Ass, ass ass. See? :)
Can't say this though --> *****. ;-)
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Re: Inappropriate Monologue
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th January 2015 @ 08:44:11 PM AEST
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hard to stay focused on demerits for inappropriate
monologue, the smile next to you didn't have to say.
Breathe deepest past the tempest past the mood muddied up by personal dread. Yes, why: why why why
said the ball, said the sentence, said a broken fist
that can come from being thick as a brick, the wise men never knew what that was like, now did they?
I belong in a play pen too some days too. They'll never learn, what, or why
It's all just a convention, I think, or the better me just does.
Cool poem!
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Re: Inappropriate Monologue
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th January 2015 @ 08:49:41 PM AEST
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Oh, hee hee, Timotheous, we can say ASS,
I'm guilty of being one myself. Oh, from the lectern of
understanding who, anyone, who can come and read these poems.
Thanks my good man!
Peace! |
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