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Clearly Blind Was I
Contributed by
JamesStockdale
on
Friday, 16th January 2015 @ 10:41:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Sleepless dreams
You and I
Forgotten memories
We would deny
Passionless love
We knew so well
Futureless past
We dwelled in hell
Victimless crime
We did our time
Rhythm less sync
For you and I
Forwardly reversed
A friendly curse
Unprepared and rehearsed
Outgoingly shy
Visionless love
Blindingly clear
Silently terse
Truthful lies
Happy life
Full of despise
Depressed euphoria
Frowned happiness
Wink of sadness
A tearful smile
Forever short
However long
You and I
Had love
All along
Copyright ©
JamesStockdale
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2015-01-16 10:41:13]
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Re: Clearly Blind Was I
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 18th January 2015 @ 07:15:22 AM AEST
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I'm glad to see you dropping thoughts to paper...very healthy, and it will help in your relationship(s).
I appreciate honesty and that you didn't hold back- it takes a certain fearlessness to do that- even to people you never meet, like on here. It's not just them you are baring yourself to, but yourself as well, and that is where honestly working out your inner turmoil can so productive.
Keep it up!
Invierno |
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Re: Clearly Blind Was I
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by Lionel on
Friday, 27th February 2015 @ 07:16:27 PM AEST
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| Remarkable. I hope it's just fiction, for your sake. |
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Re: Clearly Blind Was I
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th September 2020 @ 05:40:54 AM AEST
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//// You have definitely got the flow goin` on in this one but what I love most about it is the apparent diametric in this!!!
*applauds* |
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Re: Clearly Blind Was I
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th September 2020 @ 05:42:32 AM AEST
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| //// The title too!!! |
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Re: Clearly Blind Was I
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th October 2020 @ 05:25:21 AM AEST
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| // I`m back because I really like this poem. |
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Re: Clearly Blind Was I
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 5th December 2021 @ 01:24:40 PM AEST
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The yin to your yang. Beautifully put.
~Scorp |
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