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A Muses Flaw
Contributed by
wordsy
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Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I watched in awe
At the Muses flaw
In the words I wrote that night
And the thoughts
I still remember
Do fill me now with fright
The deep and utter darkness
That within ones soul does dwell
And the thoughts that rise
Doeth burn mine eyes
From their fowl and rancid smell
And the memories now that haunt me
In my dreams they do exist
The urgent depths of yearning
Of which I cant resist
A void and empty calling
Whose line that I must toe
To fill that wonton burning
And quench my awful woe.
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wordsy
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2003-05-26 09:05:00]
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Re: A Muses Flaw
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 09:10:49 AM AEST
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well written
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Re: A Muses Flaw
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by dilapidivination on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 06:09:58 AM AEST
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hmmm.....the flaw of the Muse. an inspiring thought. however, please do not make up your own old english to keep with the cadence. its "doth"...not "doeth". ignore.
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