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Who Am I
Contributed by
JamesStockdale
on
Tuesday, 20th January 2015 @ 01:05:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Have you ever wondered
Who you really are
Are you from
This land
Or have you
Traveled from afar
Perhaps a soul
Dropped from a fallen star
The Bible and its scholars
They all tell us so
We are destined
To heaven and or hell
Nobody knows
Could it be
We simply are
Soft fleshy robots
Wirelessly controlled
By others in the sky
It isn't clear
To me at all
We just maybe
Software, flesh, and bones
From somewhere unknown
Copyright ©
JamesStockdale
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2015-01-20 13:05:32]
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Re: Who Am I
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 20th January 2015 @ 02:25:59 PM AEST
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Interesting write
I like your analogy about the robots.
I eave you in response a few lines from my poem "See Who I Am"
"I once wished I were someone else
like that guy in the movies
who always gets the girls
or has the best friends
A crowd's gathered around
granting all his needs
but that's not who I am"
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Re: Who Am I
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by Waynster on
Tuesday, 20th January 2015 @ 03:23:58 PM AEST
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You have so much potential for writing poetry! I liked reading this poem, keep up the good work!
Wayne |
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Re: Who Am I
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by kmec1990 on
Wednesday, 21st January 2015 @ 01:47:33 AM AEST
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I like what you did it's thought provoking and not the least bit pretentious. My favorite piece you've done so far. Catching, clever...
K |
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Re: Who Am I
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Wednesday, 21st January 2015 @ 09:13:52 AM AEST
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You really dug in to the ultimate question. I enjoyed this.
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Re: Who Am I
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by alicewhite on
Thursday, 12th February 2015 @ 05:54:07 PM AEST
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Could it be
We simply are
Soft fleshy robots
Wirelessly controlled
By others in the sky
wow it is as if we are thinking the same thoughts, a universal consciousness accessed synchronicity of the singularity , love this, My thoughts are yours here and your thoughts are mine, or my house is your house and your house is mine x |
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Re: Who Am I
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 4th April 2015 @ 02:33:46 PM AEST
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A tough subject with no same answer for all 7 billion plus souls here on this 3rd rock from the sun.
You did a good job addressing a great topic.
Well done!
Invierno |
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Re: Who Am I
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th September 2020 @ 05:28:10 AM AEST
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// Have you got fifteen hours? I`ve read and heard so much about this subject or similar subjects. This is right up my alley.
"We are Borg. You will be assimilated. Resistance is futile."
Love it, Jimmy. |
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Re: Who Am I
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 5th December 2021 @ 01:28:19 PM AEST
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We only find out through adversity. Screw the guessing game.
~Scorp |
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