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I Am...
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
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Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am your power, I am your weakness, I am your love, and your hate. I am your sun, your moon, Your sky and your stars, The clouds... I am the chokehold on your life. I am your fate, your destiny, Your destruction... I am your earth, I am your air, I am your reason for existence, Your life, and your death... I am your skin... I breathe your blood, I AM your blood. I saturate your soul, I feed from it... We are one.... But we are not. I am your vision, Your touch, Your taste, Your smell, Your hearing... I am your blindness... I am the very source of your emotions... I am your fantasies, The essence of your dreams.... I am your nightmares, The heart of your fears... I will kiss your tears, And I will consume you... For I am your power... Your weakness... Your love... Your hate... And yet, I remain your destruction....
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Re: I Am...
(User Rating: 1 ) by me on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 02:01:05 AM AEST (User
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i really like this poem... i love the opposites...great write |
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Re: I Am...
(User Rating: 1 ) by dilapidivination on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 05:58:55 AM AEST (User
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Ahh yes...as I see, the continuous conundrum of organised religion corrupting what was once pure, yet still behind the papal rhetoric and blind faith moving mice to divide and conquer, is the saturnine presence of a truth as old as time itself...that which is not, is...this we cannot deny.
"do..do my work...do my dirty work, scapegoat"
right on.
.....dilapidivination
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Re: I Am...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 04:45:11 AM AEST (User
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Twisting emotions riddle this poem, I found it a good read.
Nice little twist at the end. |
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Re: I Am...
(User Rating: 1 ) by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 11:30:32 PM AEST (User
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The more I read of your writes,the more I am stoked that I do :) Another great one! |
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Re: I Am...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tori on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 11:48:49 AM AEST (User
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Good going with your writing, keep on doing it! |
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