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Waiting for a Miracle
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Sunday, 25th January 2015 @ 10:52:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Sitting here waiting on a miracle
waiting each and every day
Not going to give up
until some peace finds its way
Yeah, I've been lost for years
just gliding...going along for the ride
Haven't been done up in so long
forgotten what it feels like to be alive
I'm here at that half century mark
and my heart and soul feel so frozen
Wondering what I am doing with this life
and these meandering and tangled paths I have chosen
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2015-01-25 10:52:54]
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Re: Waiting for a Miracle
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 25th January 2015 @ 10:57:16 AM AEST
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I understand this all too well.
Great poem.
I'm nearing 52 and I lived my life for everyone else including my customers.
Time is running out and this year is going to be a big change. I wish you well! |
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Re: Waiting for a Miracle
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 25th January 2015 @ 11:48:07 AM AEST
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Hippy...How wonderful to see you back 'home'. I really like this emotive piece, straight from the heart and daring to ask yourself 'what's next?' Nothing changes without your bold voice to speak up...Great job.
~Scorp |
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Re: Waiting for a Miracle
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by Waynster on
Sunday, 25th January 2015 @ 01:22:54 PM AEST
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This poem is short, sweet, and totally AWESOME!!! Every words just fits together and the meaning is great! It sets a picture in stone, so anyone can relate to the words you say!
Absolutely awesome my poetic friend!!! Keep on writing.
Wayne |
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Re: Waiting for a Miracle
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by Apollonia on
Sunday, 25th January 2015 @ 01:52:39 PM AEST
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Love the poem, very sad tho'... but I feel the same way.
It is a long, long way
But a miracle is to happen, I do believe in that.
Never give up - I hear you!!
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Waiting for a Miracle
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by Spike on
Sunday, 25th January 2015 @ 04:12:07 PM AEST
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| Welcome to the 'hump' decade - if you're planning to live till 100, like me! You spoke to my soul with this one, L. It's a good time to take stock and repurpose yourself. New year, new phase of life. Thanks for posting, it gave me a kick up the butt I needed this morning. Sxo |
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Re: Waiting for a Miracle
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by kmec1990 on
Sunday, 25th January 2015 @ 05:29:41 PM AEST
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Totally identify! Excellent write. New motto for my next half century...
changes coming
long overdue
deal
or
disappear
Cheers
K |
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Re: Waiting for a Miracle
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by Socreights on
Sunday, 25th January 2015 @ 07:55:21 PM AEST
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| Very nice poem. Rhythm reminds me a lot of Langston Hughes. Definitely a sorrowful truth eloquently expressed. |
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Re: Waiting for a Miracle
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th January 2015 @ 10:46:05 AM AEST
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| Grand introspective write. A time for taking stock and trying to keep the path ahead less tangled. |
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Re: Waiting for a Miracle
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by PreciousKitten on
Tuesday, 27th January 2015 @ 01:57:58 PM AEST
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love the concise in this work. love the poem itself. it remains me of myself at one point. i really enjoyed this poem. please keep writing
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Re: Waiting for a Miracle
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 17th February 2015 @ 08:34:54 AM AEST
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beautifully heartfelt,
hugs n' love nessa |
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