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Line of thinking
Contributed by
drone
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Thursday, 29th January 2015 @ 11:26:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Will our line of thinking
always be paved
with the broken bones
of our weak intent
where our faithful promises
that we give like sweets
to starveing kids
now lay bleeding
opon the alter
slowly dripping
into our wine cup
that runneth over
in our church
of Letts pretend
Copyright ©
drone
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2015-01-29 11:26:07]
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Re: Line of thinking
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 29th January 2015 @ 04:56:09 PM AEST
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Brilliant thought content. With a mind such as yours, one would do well to proof read your work. Why put out such awesome poems and not bother to spell correctly?
You have my deep admiration for capturing that which I have pondered.
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