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Beautiful I Am
Contributed by
NialahGibbs
on
Sunday, 8th February 2015 @ 10:52:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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Beautiful I Am
The sparkles in my eyes
A claim of my soul worth more than a prize
From a seed growing with roots
Beauty is being fertilized
I look beautiful
Milky chocolate shade
Filled with richness displayed
Rubbing smoothly with no pressure down my left arm as the peach fuzz softly glides under my hands
I feel beautiful it demands
Ample breast up right
Expanding waist
With thighs muscular tight
Calf muscles thin and clear with haste
My shape is beautiful
Her qualities within
Perfectly matching external body means
Causing minds to spin
Not too much pride
Kept me beautiful outside
A child of God
Kept me beautiful inside
Beautiful I Am. ~ Nialah Gibbs
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Re: Beautiful I Am
(User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on
Monday, 9th February 2015 @ 03:01:08 AM AEST
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| Some parts to this I rather enjoy. Some parts make me confused, sort of stumbling over myself, trying to maintain a flow. The sound of the second and third stanza actually piqued my interest, as silly as it feels for me to say, and the last one is a good one, especially the first two lines. :) |
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Re: Beautiful I Am
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th June 2015 @ 08:31:56 PM AEST
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| You sound beautiful indeed |
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