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Restless
Contributed by
flex4life13
on
Monday, 9th February 2015 @ 10:54:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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An aeon of bewilderment, distractions impending.
Sitting beside me not a single guest.
Looking around, I scan my bounds, flat dismay.
What is it I am inquisitive about? What makes me ponder?
Never minding concern, faulty patterns of my interweaving.
Drip, drip, drip, leaky faucet when will it cease?
Every dribble aiding in my lunacy.
Waxing planetoid, stretching over me,
Spanning virtually a million miles.
Entertaining the fact that I shall never shine so bright,
positivity looming from a crescent with utmost delight.
Caricatures, meager shadows cast from lampposts,
Ogling fixatedly at their marvelous structure.
Hours gone by, leisure turned into torment,
a slumber it evades me.
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Re: Restless
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 9th February 2015 @ 04:15:32 PM AEST
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| Ah! I love it! I too am not graced with the company of slumber and her lovely kin. Laying awake for hours at a time. Eyes closed, turning with so many RPMs. I love the change from the proverbial and cliche to astounding imagery. The caricatures and planetoid, as well as the descriptions are all quite exquisite. :) |
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