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-Viscose Stream-
Contributed by
gem48
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Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The wind whistles by,
My actions echo around the alcove
Reminds me of thoughtless decisions.
The stream turns red.
Anger, pain, hatred unleashed into the water.
The thin stream runs thick.
The viscose fluid choking its own embankments.
From above it cant be seen.
Its meaningless.
It scars through the landscape,
Slashing curves and straights out of the marshland.
Only a few know of its existence,
Its dreading being discovered.
Copyright ©
gem48
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2003-05-26 21:05:00]
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Re: -Viscose Stream-
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 03:14:30 PM AEST
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Interesting. Blessed be,
~ Moonlit |
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