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Wouldn't you agree?
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
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Friday, 20th February 2015 @ 07:26:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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imprisonment
chains everywhere
all i see is
darkness and no hope
no struggle
could ease my wounds
no hardships for those
who do not understand
my pain nor rage
a light that fights
a hope seeking way
a dream that doesn't die
are the things that makes
people into characters
and
characters into people
wouldn't you agree?
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PreciousKitten
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2015-02-20 19:26:07]
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Re: Wouldn't you agree?
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by alicewhite on
Saturday, 21st February 2015 @ 01:29:07 AM AEST
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| I do agree, and I enjoyed reading this, who would want to be one of those bubble wrapped obnoxious brats on my super sweet sixteen, they are of no substance, wouldn't you agree too? |
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Re: Wouldn't you agree?
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Saturday, 21st February 2015 @ 02:26:00 PM AEST
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I agree. I'm one that's been in my own island for a very long time.
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Fox |
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Re: Wouldn't you agree?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2015 @ 09:40:24 PM AEST
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this is very insightful and roundabout towards the truth of it all. There's clutter in people who clutter up things and things about people that do seem to clutter up the truth.
It's an anguished world riddled with antagonisms past the point of reason I think on sad days.
A point of view shouldn't need to be such a thing as that.
I wish polar opposites could instead learn from each other and like magnets attract more than they do.
So, in short, yes. I do agree. Like the title too, it fits nicely with what you say.
Thanks!
Peace! |
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