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Titanic Mind
Contributed by
thepoet353897
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Tuesday, 24th February 2015 @ 09:38:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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A heart of stone as it is put
A foggy land of blackened soot
Conflicted thoughts, a complex life
Confusion, hatred, fights of strife
Day one was cursed, a millennium day
I didn't even have a say
The hive of thought began to stir
A high pitched scream all at first
From pictures of good, to the thoughts of bad
To comments that sting and make me sad
The therapists, a flicker book
A bad impression with just one look
But is this who I want to be?
Is this horror really me?
Why do the doves no longer land?
Can I conquer this complex land?
But I will try I will not fall
You throw me down but I'll stand tall
No devil's lair for afterlife
No poisoned mind of stabbing knives
So goodbye you and hello me
Let me work, leave me be
Let the gods throw the rocks
Let this Titanic leave it's dock...
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Re: Titanic Mind
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by shereal_14 on
Tuesday, 24th February 2015 @ 11:16:46 AM AEST
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| Wow... just wow... one of THE best poems I have ever read in my life... to me, what I got from this was a sense of healing... that possibly you have been through the ringer, hit rock bottom, and decided that even though you could stay in the darkness that instead you seek the light, and that though it will be a struggle, you WILL be better than who you once were! And I commend you for that! Outstanding write!!! |
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Re: Titanic Mind
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by Waynster on
Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 08:53:36 AM AEST
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Very good write, thanks for sharing, keep up the great work.
Wayne |
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