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Neck
Contributed by
thepoet353897
on
Wednesday, 4th March 2015 @ 01:18:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My thoughts rain down
Upon my victim
The many months go
All at once
And by anguish is loose
But not for long
And as I open my eyes
I breathe out
And he starts again
I curl back into my shell
My neck strains with control
The control of emotions
My many moons of hatred return
Again to reign my mind
My cycle repeats again and again
Until no more can be taken
Until a loop is found
A loop to place my neck...
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2015-03-04 13:18:38]
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Re: Neck
(User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 6th March 2015 @ 02:45:11 PM AEST
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Life must truly be a cruel master when the only option is to place a noose around your neck.
I can feel the desperation seeping out in this.
Well done
Steve |
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Re: Neck
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by Lydthon15 on
Wednesday, 25th March 2015 @ 02:31:52 PM AEST
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| A good poem on a dark subject. Still, I hope you aren't feeling this way. Thanks for sharing. |
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