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Chemical Reaction
Contributed by
UNKNOWN_UTOPIA
on
Monday, 9th March 2015 @ 12:06:38 AM in AEST
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I liked to thank you for the feeling
but I
I think that I have had enough,
in loves burning confusion
many have survived
but for me
it is just to much.
As love took a hold
there were many sensations of pure delight
in a field of moans
I lay in a daze
with love overwhelming in my mind,
in a utopia I had never known before
I found peace
and all the pain was gone.
I'm not sure when
but things started to change
slowly emotional warfare took over
and I fell back into the mouth of madness once again,
The torture
of how emotions ebbs and flows
causes a chemical reaction in my brain
driving me insane...
I'm trying my best
to hold it together
while I exist
here in the burning confusion in a daze,
I'm not saying I don't want love
it's just to much for me
I'm slowly coming undone.
Copyright ©
UNKNOWN_UTOPIA
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2015-03-09 00:06:38]
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Re: Chemical Reaction
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th March 2015 @ 02:04:59 AM AEST
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I like this and I can relate to that feeling. Someone once told me that love should not be confusing but I disagree. It can be confusing and crazy and I'm sure I could bore you with a list of other adjectives.
Nicely done.
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: Chemical Reaction
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by irisblue on
Monday, 9th March 2015 @ 09:43:03 PM AEST
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| gripping poem. it pulled me right in. love is powerful. |
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Re: Chemical Reaction
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 10th March 2015 @ 05:31:11 PM AEST
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the moments you want to be frozen in time, that safe
place, glorious love,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Chemical Reaction
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by Pogivic on
Thursday, 12th March 2015 @ 10:07:47 PM AEST
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| This helps to remind me of my past wife who suffered from a extreme hormonal imbalance. Thank you for sharing it. |
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