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That Golden Heart
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
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Monday, 9th March 2015 @ 05:25:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
Tributes
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He loved you but not enough
To separate indeed was tough
But I know you had strength within
To use your will to guide you
It battled those feelings inside you
Where you could be able to let go
I banish you now so never come back
Your words at his heart surely attacked
With misty eyes he obeyed you truly for once
Overshadowed by power his love couldn't stand
As worthy of honor with your heart in his hand
The goal was his victory over that Author's plot
So you wondered in his mind
Did your love take a decent sized spot
One moment to rethink it all do take
For this could have been a mistake
Dear Belle his heart was truly yours
'Twas a tragic flaw that the shut the doors
On hope for a moment, oh wait one more moment
Before he truly is unreachable
And with wit and might unstoppable
For that golden heart with time and grief
Could harden and denature into stone
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Deidra_Carmichael
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Re: That Golden Heart
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 09:24:42 AM AEST
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Very intricate poem.
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Re: That Golden Heart
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by thehotshotpoet on
Thursday, 12th March 2015 @ 07:54:50 AM AEST
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| well written thanks for sharing |
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Re: That Golden Heart
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by desciple on
Monday, 6th April 2015 @ 08:51:30 PM AEST
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| great write, i enjoyed reading this piece, it flowed so naturally, thanks for sharing...keep writing |
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Re: That Golden Heart
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 02:38:27 PM AEST
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I've heard it said that there is no such thing as magic.
Until I came to this site I would have said the same thing but pieces like this have persuaded me to think otherwise.
Nice work.
Steve |
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