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~~ Wishful Thinking~~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Tuesday, 17th March 2015 @ 11:12:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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~~^~~
Sitting there, chatting late at night,
Wishing they could spend more time together,
Like hours, even days,
sitting on a nearby beach, listening to the tides roll in and the birds sing.
and the full moon rising as the sun sets in the horizon.
Listening to each others heartbeat,
each heaving sighs of contentment.
fingers entwined with the others as they gaze eye to eye.........
noses barely brushing.....
lips an inch apart.......
Breaths coming quicker now.....
tension soaring
anticipation high..
lips touching,
the electricity flowing,
the joining is soft, yet hot and unique...
Both shivering at the touch....both wanting each other so much
Slowly undressing each other as their eyes caress the others body.....
They continue staring at each other longingly,
Knowing that the reactions to the touch would be unstoppable.
She peels away her eyes from his gorgeous body
Long enough to look into his eyes and smile.
She leans over to him and whispers,
I love you, my friend,
But we both know this is wrong.
With these words, she runs off down to the waters edge
Hoping hed follow her.
Hoping hed say that it wasnt
But knowing in her heart it was.
She takes a plunge into the cool water,
Knowing that is the only plunge she will take.
He follows her into the water,
Again taking her hands in his,.
This time he whispers to her,
Its ok, my love,
We dont need to go there.
The love we have for each other goes deeper then that.
With those words, he kisses her gently on the lips,
Takes her hand, and leads her back to the beach,
Where they get dressed and sit again,
This time she rests her head on his shoulder,
Happy and content just to be with him.
Their wedding day would come soon enough
~~^~~
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Jenni_K
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2015-03-17 23:12:53]
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Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th March 2015 @ 11:56:01 PM AEST
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Dreamy and beautiful.
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Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 12:50:11 AM AEST
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Awesome!!!! Lets add a few wows too!!! Did I say awesome yet? Love it, love it, love it!!!!
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Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 02:28:09 PM AEST
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oh so romantic and beautifully penned, a timeless
dreamy totally enjoyable exquisite read!
hugs, woofies n' love nessa
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Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 10:10:33 PM AEST
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| Wow- fantastic + |
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Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~
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by irisblue on
Friday, 20th March 2015 @ 09:30:51 PM AEST
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| wow a very romantic and mystic story. beautifully penned. love this. |
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Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~
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by Waynster on
Monday, 23rd March 2015 @ 03:51:18 AM AEST
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You wrote this exquisitely! You conveyed the lust wanted, but rejected to a more moral pleasure of just wanting to be together and love each other, knowing that special day will eventually come. Awesome job writing this! Thanks for sharing and oh yeah, WOW! Love it too!
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Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 24th March 2015 @ 02:25:13 AM AEST
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Wow girlfriend,
all your talent shines is this magic, heavenly write.
luv ya,
emy |
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Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~
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by Archie on
Friday, 24th March 2023 @ 06:15:02 AM AEST
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| This was really beautiful in an erotic way. You did good with this poem. |
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Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~
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by Durango on
Tuesday, 11th April 2023 @ 11:34:38 AM AEST
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The build up and withdraw is intense and keeps moving without lingering on what was already written.
"Happy and content just to be with him" until the wedding day, is a feel good ending. |
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Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 20th April 2023 @ 12:17:19 AM AEST
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Still wonderful all these years later......................!!!
James |
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